This is a very beautiful and haunting piece of writing. I like this idea of a tread-song. I love your imagery, it's very considered. I can hear you reading this in your voice. Great work. If this was in a book I was reading, I would highlight many phrases for sheer beauty, alone.
great story and great writing Chris. Mångata/bothy -- never heard of either! but taking those with me now...maybe I'll leave them behind somewhere.
So glad you liked the story. Feels good to be read so closely. And yes, leave them for someone else to find!
Haunting, like the warning of this line: “the memory surfaces like a drowned body rising, bloated, to the surface.”
This is a very beautiful and haunting piece of writing. I like this idea of a tread-song. I love your imagery, it's very considered. I can hear you reading this in your voice. Great work. If this was in a book I was reading, I would highlight many phrases for sheer beauty, alone.
Thank you, Lucy!
Gorgeous, wrenching story.
Thank you, Liz.
Beautiful story. You inspire me.
Thank you, Anna. You're very kind.